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雅思写作中的简单句怎么扩写

时间: 2023-12-27 18:13:27    人气:48

  扩句,怎么扩才更有效?

  到上面一步为止,烤鸭们可能都会觉得非常简单。那么下面就是考验大家基本功和【组装能力】的时候了,在找到了主语和谓语的修饰词之后,我们进一步对句子进行扩句。

  1) 主语加上性别

  Most female consumers shop unwisely.

  2)谓语动作用并列结构修饰

  Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.

  这里的shop and spend就是复合谓语结构,但是到目前为止,这仍旧是一个简单句,我们继续丰富它。

  3) 将主语改写成复合主语结构:

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money.

  这时主语和谓语都已经进行了改善。但是你问还有提升空间吗?当然有!

  4)添加介词短语作为细节补充说明

  时间状语和地点状语,都是你的扩句好朋友,不信我们来看:

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语)

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语)

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语)

  即使是状语,也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。

  扩句几步走

  在写作时我们同样需要注意词汇搭配的问题,下面让我们来看一个雅思写作的常见句子:

  Advertisements have influences on people.

  相信所有备考过关于广告和传播话题的烤鸭对这个句子都不会陌生对不对,那么我们现在开始试着扩句。

  1) 选定要扩句的词汇

  在这个句子中,我们先选择advertisements,influences, people这三个词汇,然后开始准备扩句。

  2) 观点添加

  选好词汇之后,就选择搭配,但搭配的组合一定要与自己的观点相符:

  influences我们通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分为commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代,所以句子如下:

  Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.

  这就是将简单句进行华丽变身的方法啦~最后环球君要给大家出个题目哦!

  本周考题

  Community service is helpful for both students and society.

  这句话老师的扩句版本为

  Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.

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